- The sexualised violence of the robber in his interaction with Anders
- Laughing yourself awake being elevated to a place with all of the other candidates for key memories
- How the title kills the suspense of what is going to happen (not a criticism, I think this is great!)
A lot of these seem like interchangeable details. Things that could have been different (different colours, different threats) but because they're named and specific they make the story seem more real.
The details that stood out for me were -
- The accuracy in naming the parts of the brain
- The blue suits of the robbers
- The sexualised violence of the robber in his interaction with Anders
- Laughing yourself awake being elevated to a place with all of the other candidates for key memories
- How the title kills the suspense of what is going to happen (not a criticism, I think this is great!)
A lot of these seem like interchangeable details. Things that could have been different (different colours, different threats) but because they're named and specific they make the story seem more real.